Battle of the Campaign Slogans

Guest Post by Scott Adams

 

Hillary Clinton rolled out a new campaign slogan this weekend: “We’re stronger together.” And by new slogan, I mean it is the same as a recent Estee Lauder ad campaign slogan. But Trump borrowed from Reagan with his “Make America Great Again” slogan, so let’s score it a tie in terms of originality.

Now let’s see how the slogans compare in terms of persuasion. I’ll start with Trump’s slogan first, then look at Clinton’s new offering.

Make America Great Again

Trump’s slogan uses the following persuasion techniques:

1. Provides no targets for disagreement.

2. Everyone has their own sense of what “great” means and how to do it. That vagueness is hardcore hypnosis technique.

3. It speaks to identity (the strongest form of persuasion) as Americans.

4. It suggests we lost something. Humans have more emotional connection to loss than potential gain.

5. It has “America” in it. That word is persuasion catnip for Americans. We have been brainwashed to have a twitch response to it.

6. It appeals to both genders.

7. It is aspirational. We all want to be better, or to make the country better.

Now let’s look at Clinton’s new slogan.

We’re Stronger Together

Clinton’s slogan uses all of the persuasion techniques listed below.

1. None

Maybe I should tell you what is wrong with Clinton’s slogan from a persuasion perspective. Otherwise, we’re done early.

From a 2D perspective, where we pretend logic and reason matter, it makes perfect sense to prefer togetherness. And you can see how that might improve strength. But no one cares about the logic of it. Here’s what it gets wrong:

1. “Together” is a concept that skews female, at least in this specific context. Estee Lauder probably thought it skewed female when they thought of it too. We’re socially primed to see women as the gender that cooperates, while men are the gender who refuse to ask directions. Clinton’s slogan suggests we are stronger when we cooperate like women. This probably plays well with women and not so well with men, at least on an identity level.

2. “Stronger” is generally a good word, but Trump already dominates that branding. It is far too late to frame Clinton as the strong one. So it comes across as a mixed message.

3. Togetherness sounds good(ish), but it falls short of an aspiration. No one wakes up with a passion to pursue togetherness. Half of the country is comprised of introverts, loners, and competitive a-holes. Those folks want less togetherness, even if they mean it in an entirely different way. On an irrational level, togetherness – in all its forms – is simply not a universal desire. Compare that to making America greater, which is all good, all the time, to all Americans.

4. “Stronger together” reflexively reminds you of socialism. America already has plenty of socialist parts, but the majority of voters probably want some limits on how far it goes. By comparison, no one wants to limit how “great” America gets.

I realize that people reading this blog consider me hugely biased in favor of Trump because I write about his persuasion skills. If you believe the Clinton slogan works on a persuasion level, and I missed a trick, let me know what I missed. The slogan looks empty to me.

My contention is that Trump has the best persuasion skills I have ever seen. Clinton’s team seems to have no trace of that particular skill. Obviously Clinton has her own advantages, including her greater mastery of the issues.

But I doubt the issues will matter this year. They never have before.


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TPC
TPC
May 24, 2016 11:04 am

” We’re socially primed to see women as the gender that cooperates, while men are the gender who refuse to ask directions.”

Which is fucking insane, because guys will work together to get a project done, but every “all female” team I’ve ever seen in action degenerated into a gigantic pissing match between “alpha” bitches who would rather assert dominance than complete the task at hand.

diogenes
diogenes
May 24, 2016 11:26 am

TPC you nailed it !!!!!! Guys are team players who want to get the job done as easy as possible. If it ain’t broke, don’t fix it. Women have to prove they are important or just change things to act like they are doing something to prove their worth. My wife teaches at a college and I have seen this behavior over and over again.

TPC
TPC
May 24, 2016 11:28 am

@diogenes – Guys will usually have an altercation or two to sort out the hierarchy, BUT the work continues both before and after the bullshit erupts.

For women the job literally just turns into the machinations. I think Machiavelli must have been a woman.

Rob
Rob
May 24, 2016 12:13 pm

Voting in merika is like getting a blowjob from a transvestite on Hollywood Blvd. It feels real good but if somebody takes your picture you are going to regret it. Just ask Hugh Grant. It’s better to avoid the regret and disgust you are going to experience from both the voting, and the blowjob on Hollywood Blvd. Neither is likely to make you happy in the end.

RHS Jr
RHS Jr
May 24, 2016 1:09 pm

Watched “Meet John Doe” movie from 1941 and the citizens were a huge contrast to today. They came together as one body of Americans in “John Doe Clubs” (politicians were excluded). TPTB and their Controlled Media’s PC push of Diversity and Multiculturalism have now made Personas Non-Grata out of Males, Whites, Southerners, Rednecks, Conservatives, Christians, Westerners, Blacks, Mexicans, LGBTs, Urbanites, Hicks, Youth, Elderly, Military, Police, Students, Muslims etc. There is no possibility of any American Unity ever emerging again.

BamBam
BamBam
May 24, 2016 2:29 pm

I think you guys are missing the appeal of Clinton’s dog whistle. Her problem isn’t capturing right-wing votes, or even necessarily moderates. She’ll have to do those things to win, but right now she’s losing to that one boring history professor who nobody can really stand, but says they like because he gives out A’s as long as you parrot his nonsense on the final. Clinton’s problem is from the left: “It takes a village, kumbaya, we’re all the same”. The democratic primary has turned from her coronation to a farce. She needs to shore up the crowd who says “Diversity is our strength” (hence the striking similarity of her slogan). Otherwise, she goes into the real election with ambivalent, apathetic support against an energized, entertaining opponent.

Robert Gore
Robert Gore
May 24, 2016 2:53 pm

We’re Stronger Together: Hillary Clinton and her convict comrades at a federal penitentiiary.

Mesomorph
Mesomorph
May 24, 2016 3:40 pm

When she says “We” I must assume she is talking about Wall Street, Saudi royalty and a few noteworthy globalists.

She is right. They need to stick together. Maybe get their stories straight.

Suzanna
Suzanna
May 24, 2016 4:34 pm

These elections coming up…24/7 commentary.
Let’s hope we get to vote…the threats made from
every quarter have our people walking in a minefield.

Ed
Ed
May 24, 2016 6:27 pm

“Obviously Clinton has her own advantages, including her greater mastery of the issues.”

This guy needs to wait a few hours after huffing glue before he writes.

Fred Hayek
Fred Hayek
May 24, 2016 7:17 pm

BamBam. So are the hard lefties who are sick to f***ing death of being taken for granted by the corporate asshole dems like Bill Clinton and Bathhouse Barry going to feel even a scintilla more motivation to vote for her because of “Stronger Together”? I think the ones who don’t want to go along will all just say, “Yeah, you have more votes to pass the TTP if we all help you. F*** You, you corrrupt old crone!”

Rise Up
Rise Up
May 24, 2016 7:51 pm

The constant rebranding of Hitlery Clinton will not change the simple fact that she is old hat. A terrible campaigner with nothing fresh to say. Well, maybe that dog bark was something new.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=QMZqS7q7voY

starfcker
starfcker
May 25, 2016 3:14 am

Great post, Ed. Stronger together was the miami heat’s playoff slogan when they had LBJ.