I REMEMBER

Guest Post by Oldtimer

As the snow falls gently, I stand and remember

With my hand on my chin, deep in the timber.

I come here for it’s quiet, lonely, and still,

I hide like the whitetail, in valley and on hill.

Just what happened, and what went wrong?

Are the good times over, wasn’t that Merle’s song?

It began real slow, and then it picked up steam,

like a chain of events, that cause a runaway team.

I stand and ponder, on what happened and why,

I come here to think, to pray and to cry.

If you say that is foolish, read Ezekiel chapter nine,

Read it with a looking glass, search it real fine.

It used to be different, a man’s word was his bond.

It used to be slower, like fishin’ a quiet pond.

Listen to speeches, by Eisenhower and Truman,

Makes a man wonder, if this new crop is human.

The police were good folk, you considered them brother;

The children were fed, had Father and Mother.

Much of that is gone now, vanished like vapor;

A handshake means nothing, they want it on paper.

“What is the temp, and did that old mare foal?”

Men used to talk like that, but that time is no mo.

I am old fashioned, yes that is for sure,

A disease says society, of which is no cure.

Hold the door open, for a lady and a man,

Oil the old cook stove and the cast iron pan.

Have you slammed a truck door, and heard an owl talk back?

Sought shelter from a rain, in an old rusty shack?

Men used to know, how to scald and scrape a hog,

And most could take an axe, and hack out a log.

They say country folk, they’re ignorant and dumb,

Stick up their noses and give you the thumb.

But that’s the price you’ll pay, for not being fake,

For not chasing riches, and money forsake.

Materialism is a cancer, that has eaten this nation;

It’s been pumped like gas, from a huge fillin’ station.

I would rather be poor, and real to the bone,

And not dance one step, to this new music tone.

So I reckon, I’ll die soon, and no longer cry;

As the Lord takes my spirit, high in the sky.

And as the snow falls gently, I stand and remember,

with my hand on my chin, deep in the timber.

—Old Timer

This is my home, and most of the older folks in this video are gone. Seaman Rayfield, the man at the beginning of this video passed in 2012 and I sat with him on his deathbed, and, we talked of the change he had seen in his lifetime – much change. I know the video is long, but it tells a story for those who have ears to hear and eyes to see. There is even a part 2 on youtube for any who care to view it also.

The Ozarks is a fine place to live, as are many places in America, I am certain; this just happens to be home for me. My purpose for the poem could be summed up rather easy like. People are in too much of a hurry and have forgotten where they come from….. slow down, look back. Men and women used to be unique and full of character, but now people have succumbed to a life as if somebody had cut them all out like little gingerbread men. Thank you for your time, —-Old Timer

“Thus saith the LORD, Stand ye in the ways, and see, and ask for the old paths, where is the good way, and walk therein, and ye shall find rest for your souls………….But they said, we will not walk therein.” Jer. 6;16)

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44 Comments
M G
M G
February 18, 2020 7:27 pm

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Nice. Let’s try to keep it.

Old Timer
Old Timer
  M G
February 18, 2020 8:01 pm

MG, Thank you for posting that video.

Vixen Vic
Vixen Vic
February 18, 2020 7:33 pm

I enjoyed the poem. When I get the chance, I’ll watch the video.

Old Timer
Old Timer
  Vixen Vic
February 18, 2020 9:42 pm

Thanks Vixen Vic, glad you liked it.

SeeBee
SeeBee
February 18, 2020 7:39 pm

Beautifully powerful. Thank you, OT.

Old Timer
Old Timer
  SeeBee
February 18, 2020 9:41 pm

Nice to meet you SeeBee, thank you.

Steve
Steve
February 18, 2020 7:43 pm

I was fortunate enough to spent most summers on a farm in S. Carolina. I picked watermelons with a crew of about 20. Only a few of us were white. Everybody had a nickname. Boot was the foreman. We had Gaga who was deaf mute but could tear it up when angry or excited. A-ya, waa, wa meant something and everybody knew what he meant. BTW, he was quite the ladies man. Crow, Ham, Jimbo, Big Ed were the fellas I worked with.
The black families lived in wooden shacks and outhouses. Most had a well pump, some even in the kitchen but most in the front yard.
Man we had fun. Everything was funny and we laughed till we cried.
Awesome memories of a time long ago.
OLD TIMER,thanks for letting me remember and reflect.

Old Timer
Old Timer
  Steve
February 18, 2020 7:57 pm

Now that made me slap my chair and smile;…. there you go. What a great story Steve, thank you.

I Love Hillary (EC)
I Love Hillary (EC)
  Old Timer
February 18, 2020 9:01 pm

OT, I’m reminded of the lyrics in an old song apropos of your poem.

I’ve got this feelin’ down deep in my soul that I just can’t lose
Guess I’m on my way
Needed a friend
And the way I feel now I guess I’ll be with you ’till the end
Guess I’m on my way
Mighty glad you stayed

Old Timer
Old Timer
  I Love Hillary (EC)
February 18, 2020 9:19 pm

Thanks for sharing EC

Iska Waran
Iska Waran
February 18, 2020 8:54 pm

People went to church all in their finery.
Now their step grandchildren are saying they’re non-binary.

Old Timer
Old Timer
  Iska Waran
February 18, 2020 9:43 pm

Sad but how true Iska.

niebo
niebo
February 18, 2020 9:14 pm

“. . .quaint place names, and memories of what used to be home.”

And as the snow falls gently, I stand and remember,

with my hand on my chin, deep in the timber.

Great video, OT; thanks for sharing. And the poem is quite moving, bittersweet; the work of an oldtimer, sure, but an old soul, even surer.

And even though you won’t dance to the new music tone, if you don’t mind, take a listen to one of mine (doesn’t start til about 20 seconds in, just fyi):

Old Timer
Old Timer
  niebo
February 18, 2020 9:25 pm

Thank you so much Niebo, and thank you for sharing. To be clear, although I am not much of a music person I really meant the music as in this fast paced world we live in. Again, thank you for sharing, you are talented indeed. Nice to meet you Niebo!

niebo
niebo
  Old Timer
February 19, 2020 12:02 am

Thank you, Sir, and same to you!

Anonymous
Anonymous
February 18, 2020 10:07 pm

Thank you O.T. for a trip down memory lane.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=dt6-ZtOL_gY

Anonymous
Anonymous
February 18, 2020 10:32 pm

One of the finest things that I have seen and heard on TBP. Thank you OT. This says it better I think:

New Living Translation
This is what the LORD says: “Stop at the crossroads and look around. Ask for the old, godly way, and walk in it. Travel its path, and you will find rest for your souls. But you reply, ‘No, that’s not the road we want!’

Old Timer
Old Timer
  Anonymous
February 19, 2020 8:01 am

Thank you and yes, I do believe that is exactly what the LORD was telling us. Seek His way, His paths because it is the only good way, but the world says, no……….sad.

Gloriously Deplorable Paul
Gloriously Deplorable Paul
February 18, 2020 10:38 pm

Thanks OT. That was outstanding.

Missy Coyote
Missy Coyote
February 18, 2020 10:40 pm

I don’t know what to say Old Timer. Thank you and here is what come to my mind, “like a miracle, some golden words, rolled off of someones tongue.”

Hardscrabble Farmer
Hardscrabble Farmer
February 18, 2020 10:43 pm

Bizarre.

I watched this last night on youtube, first time I’d heard of it or seen it before and you post it today.

Synchronicity everywhere.

Thanks for the poem too.

Old Timer
Old Timer
  Hardscrabble Farmer
February 19, 2020 8:01 am

Thanks, and yes, very Bizarre.

Anonymous
Anonymous
February 18, 2020 10:49 pm
Anonymous
Anonymous
February 18, 2020 10:52 pm

All My Tears
Julie Miller
When I go, don’t cry for me
In my father’s arms I’ll be
The wounds this world left on my sou
L will all be healed, and I’ll be whole
Sun and moon will be replaced with the light of Jesus’ face
And I will not be ashamed, for my savior knows my name
It don’t matter where you bury me
I’ll be home and I’ll be free
It don’t matter where I lay
All my tears be washed away
Gold and silver blind the eye, temporary riches lie
So come and eat from Heaven’s store
Come and drink, and thirst no more
So weep not for me, my friend
When my time below does end
For my life belongs to him
Who will raise from the dead again
It don’t matter where you bury me
I’ll be home and I’ll be free
It don’t matter where I lay
All my tears be washed away

Old Timer
Old Timer
  Anonymous
February 19, 2020 8:13 am

Thank you for sharing, have a blessed day.

TS
TS
February 18, 2020 10:58 pm

Excellent, Oldtimer.

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nkit
nkit
February 18, 2020 11:37 pm

Great poetry…you Old Buzzard… thanks for sharing…

Old Timer
Old Timer
  nkit
February 19, 2020 8:05 am

Haha! Thank you, especially the Old Buzzard part!

Fleabaggs
Fleabaggs
February 19, 2020 12:51 am

O.T.
Half way through the video doing 10 minutes at a time enjoying it.
I was born on a small farm in a tar paper shack in 48 with the well outside and was working with the others doing small stuff way before I started school. Those were the happiest days of my life. By nine I was splitting every piece of wood we burned in winter and enjoyed it.
The second worse thing to ever happen to me was moving to the city at 13.

Old Timer
Old Timer
  Fleabaggs
February 19, 2020 8:09 am

Thank you for sharing that info Flea, and like Steve, you consider them very happy times.

flash
flash
February 19, 2020 7:26 am

1000+ I do miss the subtle bluntness of country folk and the no pretense lifestyle they all once led.

flash
flash
  flash
February 19, 2020 7:30 am
Old Timer
Old Timer
  flash
February 19, 2020 8:11 am

Thank you flash, your reading my mail.

flash
flash
  Old Timer
February 19, 2020 8:26 am

Thanks for the walk down memory lane although tt reminded me the old South is gone. It’s just cookie cutter strip malls, fast food and virtue signaling dullards now. All the old people with striking and amusing character are gone and have been replaced by automatons indoctrinated since birth by school, church and government to be simple consumer units turning a blind eye to the debasement of everything that mad US great, all in the name of tolerance . There is no fire in their belly’s nor thought, outside of getting their A , in their heads. They exist to exist. That’s all.

Old Timer
Old Timer
  flash
February 19, 2020 8:36 am

I could not have explained it as well as you just did. It’s great to meet you and now I have a better understanding of who Flash is when I read your comments in the future.

TN Patriot
TN Patriot
February 19, 2020 9:02 am

O T – Great poem and a very poignant video showing a place and time that is unfathomable to those who live on the East and Left coasts. Simple people, living a simple life loving their God, their families and their communities.

Old Timer
Old Timer
  TN Patriot
February 19, 2020 10:30 am

Absolutely TN, it is unfathomable to many. Who would have ever thought that people who live in the same country could live such different lives? A neighbor just moved here from a coastal state, after several of us visited him to welcome he and his family with food and greeting, he locked his gate. He told me later, he doesn’t like people coming to his house. Sadly, that is not an isolated case whatsoever. It’s getting to the point that I am gun shy to even say howdy anymore. Not the country I grew up in.

I am not patting ourselves on the back, just stating a fact here. The natives here still wave to everyone we meet on the highway, whether we know them or not. Seriously, I have heard people say, when they first moved here, they thought everyone was giving them the middle finger. Obviously, because people don’t wave for lift an index finger to say hello where they came from.

TN Patriot
TN Patriot
  Old Timer
February 19, 2020 1:50 pm

I was raised waving at each passing vehicle, as well, but since moving into the fast lane in the big city have lost that habit. It is a shame that people feel intruded upon by your offers of hospitality. Obviously, they were raised in a different world, with different worldviews, which is not a good thing.

After the great reset, we should see a simple lifestyle return, but it will be a terrible road we travel to get there.

God Bless, Old Timer

Mary Christine
Mary Christine
February 19, 2020 9:46 am

There are some really amazing people here at TBP. So glad you posted this, OT. I love the Ozarks. Always have since the first time I visited when I was very small. Branson was a one horse town back then. The hills are so beautiful when they are covered by the misty fog on summer mornings.

Our cousins got us hooked on Kayaking. The the spring fed rivers run so clear down in those parts of the state.

Old Timer
Old Timer
  Mary Christine
February 19, 2020 10:45 am

Thank you Mary, I like reading your comments, should have told you so before now, but talking to ladies is not easy for me. I don’t know why but I thought MyGirl was a man, bout fell out of my chair when she revealed she was a woman! Yikes! LOL! This computer stuff is new to me and I feel very awkward much of the time. I am just a rough old hillbilly and what many may find funny, is that I have never liked poetry at all, yuck. One day I was thinking on something and I began writing about it and to my surprise it began to rhyme. Since then, I have written several dozen poems and they just come to me very quick. The above poem, I wrote yesterday in about 30 minutes, which is rather long for the most part.

Yes, the Ozarks has beautiful rivers and streams. Thanks again, Mary

When Red Ropes Rap (EC)
When Red Ropes Rap (EC)
February 19, 2020 10:07 am

It’s my long held opinion (since 2 years) that memorable times have a bit of difficulty in them. If you think of the times you recount, they all consist of a problem solved even if it was just dealing with a bad hair day. M G said something about a quest but that is part of a story. Without a story, we have nothing but a nice day. Nice days are nice but they go down like smooth whiskey and one day being like the next, we don’t realize 20 years have gone by.

M G
M G
  When Red Ropes Rap (EC)
February 19, 2020 2:46 pm

We just do what we do, not realizing what we’ve done.

overthecliff
overthecliff
February 19, 2020 12:03 pm

Lot of good Missouri people on this site.

M G
M G
  overthecliff
February 19, 2020 2:43 pm

That was redundant; Missouri people are generally, by character and definition, good on site.