Guest Post by Fred Reed
Recently I took part in a discussion of writing and how to do it at Counter-Currents.com. This being a topic of some importance to me, I decided to throw together a few thoughts in a form more coherent that I could do in a podcast. A danger in doing this is that readers will joyfully point out instances in which I have failed to follow my own suggestions. To these sins I confess in advance. Anyway:
This is not a golden age of writing. For one thing, few today have the grasp of English grammar that long ago we had learned by the fifth grade, or any idea why it might be important. Nor, I suspect, have many read much in the best authors in English and so have not acquired an ingrained feel for what is good and what isn’t. I may be wrong. I hope so.
For another, good writing is elitist, and must be. Elitism means a preference for the better to the worse. In an intellectual climate resembling that of an urban bus station, in which the lower cultural orders seek to drag standards to the bottom, few will prefer good writing to bad, or know the difference.
Further, when people are in constant communication via telephones, garbling and semiliteracy are less important than they were when poor communication demanded clarity. In the following we will pretend that it is 1955 and that I am speaking to young who want to write well.
To begin, my advice to the aspiring writer is to forget “creativity.” Writing is first a craft, involving rules and principles and things to which the student should learn to pay attention. Later, perhaps, writing is an art. You have to learn the notes before playing a concerto. Accepting this is important.
Also important, crucial I would say, is the habit of paying attention to language itself, not just its content. By this I mean the structure of sentences, choice of words, turn of phrase. If you read a piece and think it good, read it again and ask why it is good. If an analytical piece, is the analysis clear and compelling? The phrasing fresh and devoid of cliche? The vocabulary extensive and correct in use?
To again use a comparison to music, the listener doesn’t have to know music theory, but the musician does.
Here some brief notes on grammar, a maligned field. Pardon me if I am didactic, but these things are worth knowing.
A language consists of its grammar and vocabulary. Grammar is the structure that allows words to convey meaning with respect to each other. Americans imbibe with theirr mother’s milk a close approximation of the structure of English but a writer needs better.
All European languages of which I am aware (Basque is a mystery to me) have similar structures. Knowing English grammar has benefits beyond being able to write well. If you know the six-part present-tense structure of an English verb, first-person singular and plural, second-person, etc., then learning Spanish verbs is just a matter of plugging new words into a familiar pattern. Otherwise, you have problems. My wife Violeta, Mexican, who for years made her living teaching Spanish to gringos, despaired of students who did not grasp the structure of their own language. They were essentially unteachable.
So, to the aspiring writer I would say: If you don’t know English grammar, learn it. It can be daunting. Tenses, compound tenses, indicative voice, subjunctive mood, appositives, participles, gerunds, linking verbs, prepositions, dependent clauses, and so on. If we could do it by the fifth grade, certainly you can do it. If nothing else, in will inculcate an awareness of the mechanics of English.
Why? Knowledge gives you an entirely different understanding of things. (You saw it here first.) I can watch a soccer game and get a kick out of all the players running in all directions. Violeta, being a Mexican, whose national game it is, sees strategy, tactics, calculated moves, and the goal is not the random result of randomly kicking the ball but the product of cooperating players who know exactly what they are doing. So with writing. People who know what is going on see a different game.
Let us consider some rules of composition which, in conjunction, make all the difference. They can be broken to good effect at times, but these times should be few. I have not invented them. A half century ago, they were known to all competent writers.
Follow a long, complex sentence with a short, crispy one. Long sentences following long sentences tire the reader, who is likely to decide to read something else.
Omit unnecessary words. Don’t say “adverse weather conditions.” Say “bad weather.” Don’t say that an airplane “has the capability to fly long distances.” Say that it “can fly long distances,” or that it has a long range. Especially bad is “the process{” as in “the repair process.” Just say “repair.”}
A useful exercise is to go through newspaper stories and see how many words can be crossed out without loss. or how many of the foregoing rules have been infelicitously broken.
Don’t use the same word too near itself. Why this reads badly I don’t know, but it does.
The verb agrees with the subject of the sentence, not the object of the nearest preposition. Wrong: “The statues in the house, near the big bay window, was the clue that gave John away.”
Avoid cliches as you would a rabid dog. They make the sensitive reader want to get a drink, or play tennis, or do anything but keep reading. Never, ever say “the tip of the iceberg.” Or, please, please, “the American dream,” or “the American people.” Or “the love of my life.” Or “the beginning of the end.” Certain words amount to cliches by overuse. “Incredibly” is one. The inexperienced writer uses it with abandon in an attempt to give force to a sentence that doesn’t have any.
Learn to handle the subjunctive. “It is important that you not smoke” and “It is important that you don’t smoke” mean different things.
Fresh similes and metaphors may require an imagination that not everyone has, but are worth seeking. Readers of Raymond Chandler probably remember his phraseology after they have forgotten the plots of his books. “He had a nose like a straphanger’s elbow.” Or, “She was a blonde to make a bishop kick a hole in a stained-glass window.”
In fiction, avoid sex scenes. You can’t compete with PornHub. In more puritanical times, such described couplings may have been titillating. Today they are just embarrassing.
Bad language, both obscenity and profanity, have their place but should be used with exceeding infrequency as they quickly become merely crass. They are more admissible in the dialog of characters of coarse background, but even here restraint is advisable.
Avoid mixed metaphors. They are often ridiculous and jar the sensitive reader, making him wonder what and whether the writer was thinking. “The octopus of Nazism has sung its swan song.”
Use the words “very” and “significant” sparingly. These are used by poor or inexperienced writers attempting to give force to statements. They usually do the opposite. Of the two, “significant” is the more discardable. “The stock market rose significantly.” If it rose insignificantly, the reader will think why would you tell him about it?
Be careful not to confuse similar words. As was said in newspapering, a “burro” is an ass. A “burrow” is a hole in the ground. A writer should know the difference. “Sensuous” means “appealing to the senses,” as in, “The queen wore a sensuous green dress.” “Sensual” means “pertaining to the sexual.” “His thoughts were sensual as he approached the naked cheerleader doing her pole dance.” “Bellicose” means “aggressive, inclined to fight.” “Belligerent,” from the Latin gerund, means, “engaged in fighting.” “The bellicosity of the Japanese led to war, in which they and the Chinese were the chief belligerents.” These latter two are now often used interchangeably, diminishing the clarity of language.
Pay attention to what words actually mean. Few today do, in universities or anywhere else but to literate readers they matter. For example, “impact” means a physical blow. It is not a verb. Such horrors as “losing the game impacted very significantly on his self-worth” probably justify hanging. Psychobabble like “self-worth” should be strenuously avoided.
Here we come to the vexed matter of grammatical gender. In the past, the masculine “he” included women: “If a traveler comes to New York, he will marvel at the tall buildings.” In ages in which men were more dominant than they now are, this sort of thing was tolerable, or at least tolerated. This is not uniquely a difficulty in English. In Spanish, “niños,” literally “little boys,” is used to mean children of both sexes.
This has led to both awkwardness and absurdity. “If someone comes into the gym,tell him or her to put his or her dress in his or her locker.” Or, If someone comes into the women’s gym, tell them to put on their sports bra.” , The workaround embedding itself in the culture is to use “them,” “they,” and “their” as indefinite pronouns. This is I think necessary though objectionable and one day will cease to jar the literate, if there be any. Today they just sound uneducated.
Habing written your short story or magazine piece, read it aloud to yourself. Does it sound natural? Don’t say, “Mary said to the cop, ‘I saw Jane ascending the stairs with her cold dark eyes full of hatred and her hand running along the elaborately carved French Revival banister with the brass ornamentation.” Nobody talks that way. It is called exposition in dialog. You should have the detective who is the narrative voice in your story do the describing. Exposition in dialog is bed because it gives the story, or book, a phoniness that the reader may not be able to shake.
Now a few thoughts on the management of editors, the assumption here being that you want to write political commentary.
First, you should adopt some point on the Left-Right political spectrum, it doesn’t matter which, and never, ever stray from it. Neither readers nor editors are forgiving. If you are the most flaming liberal, slanted to the point of being vertical, and then write a column in favor of gun rights, it may be your last. If you are the most thunderous conservative, way out on the right wing where the feathers grow thinn and giddy space beckons, and then you write in favor of reparations to blacks, you will need another job.
Second, from columnists most editors want predictability, not thought or originality. A newspaper editor does not want to wake up mornings and think, “Oh God, what has Fred written now, and how many advertisers will jump ship?” They want slot columnists: the black male conservative, the house-broken white conservative, the moderate male liberal, and so on. These never make waves, never do anything unexpected, so the editor can worry instead about the many other things that worry editors.
Third, your job as a columnist is to tell your readers what they already believe in engaging prose. They want confirmation, not information. The farther to the Right or Left they are, the less they will tolerate any disturbance to the tranquil certainties they espouse.
They do like seeing the infidels smashed. Years back I read of a columnist, I forget where, I think in the Thirties, who was wildly liberal to the point of being goofy. He apparently overdid it because another writer, far to the Right, began attacking him savagely. For years the controversy raged, until it was discovered that they were the same guy. Outrage erupted. Was this not unprincipled?
No, the guy responded. He said his job was to affirm the beliefs, or delusions, of his readers, and he was doing so in both cases. What was the problem?
Them’s my thoughts, for whatever they may be worth.
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To the anal retentive languages change over time, get over it. Sometimes the changes are good and others not so much, like speaking in emoji’s.
Otherwise we’d still be writing in cuneiform and speaking old english…
It is true that yesterday the word “sugar” referred to a sweetening agent, but this is today, and today it refers to a salinifying agent, so just shut up, drink your coffee and be grateful.
So gay…
HAHAHHA!
Yeah, Shakespeare is SOOO passe with all them silly words n’ shit.
LOL!
Name the good changes. Good, not lazy.
-cuneiform
-we
pick one
I see that you flunked out of journalism school. Taken in your context, “emoji’s” is meant to be plural. The way you wrote the word, it’s possessive. Too many commenters put an apostrophe before the final letter of a word, if that letter is an ‘s’.
Thx for proving my point.
Yes, I see your point. It’s the top of your head.
The point on the top of your head, dunce cap?
Because they’re dumb and thick-headed. That’s why they keep doing it, over and over.
Dis bees a greetz artikal.
It took more effort to write that and I get a silly DV.
Emojis, not “emoji’s.” ‘s is called a possessive. What are you trying to communicate that the emojis possess in your sentence? Nothing. So why the ‘s?
Why do adults who spend so much time reading and writing on the internet keep making that same mistake, over and over?
Which is correct possesive?
Jesus’
Or
Jesus’s
“Anal rententive languages”?
English teacher eh?
Tain’t, tain’t, tain’t
Lol
Good writing tips.
Slightly hyperbolic:
“The inexperienced writer uses it with abandon in an attempt to give force to a sentence that doesn’t have any.”
Less bolic:
“The inexperienced writer uses it in an attempt to give weight to an argument that is light on the facts .”
31 words:
A useful exercise is to go through newspaper stories and see how many words can be crossed out without loss. or how many of the foregoing rules have been infelicitously broken.
19 words:
Going through newspaper stories, and seeing how many words can be crossed out without losing meaning, can be instructive.
6 words:
I like what you did there.
2 words:
Nice job!
1 word:
Succinct
!
5 words:
You are full of shit.
5 words
Learn by trying different things.
Although I was a poet and didn’t know it, I dropped out in the third grade when I learned you don’t need no grammar when you can swing a 22 ounce framing hammer.
A very nice article Mr Reed.
Thank you.
It is nice to read well written sentences.
It is also nice to write them.
“Here some brief notes on grammar, a maligned field.”
JFC
Orwell:
People take you more seriously when you can speak properly.
‘Clothes DO make the man. Naked people have no influence in society.” – Mark Twain
Spoken like an ugly person.
Ordered writing indicates ordered thinking.
Beautiful, gramatically correct writing indicates intelligence, creativity, thorough schooling, and breeding.
Intelligence, creativity, and beauty proclaim themselves. Breeding creates them.
Grammatically correct writing is pure embellishment. Don’t mistake the painted flames for the speed of the car.
Thorough schooling is just culture. It’s espalier for Man.
*sigh*
And how, pray tell to does intelligence, creativity, and beauty proclaim themselves?
Through writing well. Not by itself from some literary ether.
Breeding is the nursery that grows it all.
Gramatically correct writing is the engine that powers the car, not the flame job you attribute it to.
Try writing a grammatically incorrect sentence and call that “embellishment” That sentence is laughable on it’s face.
Thorough schooling is anything but culture, as we see now as we have no schooling in this culture.
You got every bit of your sophistry wrong.
This isn’t rocket surgery.
Writing is like a bed of ornamental flowers in a paradisiacal garden. It may add to the beauty, but it is not required.
You do not determine the beauty of a woman through her writing. Were The Iliad or Beowulf created by morons because they were oral rather than written? I am glad the poems were recorded, but wouldn’t we be richer with people able to perform them and hear them?
If one is writing a post on the proper use of grammar and rules, it might behoove him to proofread said post. To wit:
Americans imbibe with theirr mother’s milk
Habing written your short story or magazine piece
Sure, I’m being pedantic. Our author is more so. While I agree in principle that writing has gone to shyte, even in publications that should know better, we are dealing with a populous that doesn’t know the difference between they’re, their and there. Or its and it’s. This is in a day when nearly every text editor puts the squiggly red line under misspelled or misused words.
I would love to read articles written with proper grammar, comments filled with witty repartee and thoughtful and succinct Gab posts. But, perhaps we could start with using the apostrophe correctly.
And yes, I know you are not supposed to start a sentence with but. I know the rule and I chose to break it.
The crux of the biscuit is the apostrophe.
Grandma always put jam on the crux of the biscuit. An apostrophe ain’t gonna keep you working in the field till dinner.
Might be movin’ to Montana soon just to raise me up a crop of dental floss.
Exposition in dialog is bed because it gives…..
Our best grammar Nazi, El Coyote, passed on some time ago. He is sorely missed. That said, Boomers are the last generation, with the possible exception of a much fewer number of X’rs , to be taught proper grammar in schools. Everyone else couldn’t grammar their way out of a paper bag.
I only have a couple things that bother me. Spelling common words wrong and not using paragraphs. If someone writes a long diatribe here without any paragraphs, I’m skipping it.
My biggest pet peeve is seeing people spell lose “loose”.
Fred needs to edit an essay about grammar better before he publishes it.
I spent time in western Canada in my early teen years in the 80s. The three years of junior high English focused entirely on grammar. I thought it was a waste of my time and frequently told my teacher so. It wasn’t until I moved to southern Ontario in my mid teens that I realized I was years ahead on grammar skills compared to my peers.
My grammar training has served me well professionally. I’ve been brought in many times to rewrite technical reports written by my colleagues who are technically savvy but not able to explain things in a way most people reading their report can understand.
Thanks Mr. Kozier. You were right. That English grammar stuff was not a waste of my time.
Dot Guv Agent: “Cool. Now I know how to keep you away from information. Thanks!”
We call it the millennial tick: fuck this, f that, f-ing this F-ing that. I always think they have No adjectives.
Now they would say you’re a prude but it’s so pitiful and not shocking. Just a bad habit.
Yeah, cuz fuck was invented in 2000 and not learnt from their elders at all.
BAM! Back the truck up and hit it again!
…👁️’ve Never been accused of being the brightest Tool in the Shed.
Accordingly, unless it’s “very” and “significant” simultaneously?
Gonna need to be in a video format.
Actually, the reason for the communication deterioration we now witness is so simple most reject it. (Is.59 – for truth is fallen in the street…) People, under the influence of the enemy who is currently allowed access, now reject absolute truth. People have swallowed so many lies such as “original manuscripts” (which were really corrupt, rotting in the dark – as opposed to the living word which continually passed down by believers) truth is now seen as relative – just like creation. People have free will. No one is forced to come to God. But the opportunity to believe will soon be withdrawn & judgment WILL fall. The point being that truth requires exactitude of language (vocabulary/grammar etc.). You will find that exactitude in God’s perfect, preserved word.
When I read posts on the net I find the same words are misspelled over and over.
Paid is now “payed”
Disgusting is now “discusting”
And the pronoun dance is making articles unreadable…just try to make heads or tales of an article where someone’s pronoun is “they”. Ridiculous.
Worse is the use of they/them/their/its when detailing the aspects of a technical issue. New techs working in my shop were always taken to the carpet on the first utterance of third person pronouns for technical terms. Fix that problem fastly and furiously.
A lot of that has to do with someone speaking their comments & the AI transcribes the wrong word.
The Martin Armstrong defense. Quite the gambit! Blame it on tech.
Now you begin to understand the terrible nature of what God did at the Tower of Babel…and we’re doing it to ourselves all over again. It makes no sense.
“Critical thinking is a skill which is driven by the cycle of grammar, logic, and rhetoric. The purpose of grammar is to bring a consistent order to a body of knowledge. The purpose of logic is to extract understanding from the body of knowledge. Rhetoric is the cogent explanation of that body of knowledge. In ancient times, students were taught the Trivium at home, by their parents, as a pre-requisite for admission into universities.”
Language skills, beginning with grammar, are necessary to fight mind control, and are the basis of the West, writes Sasha Latypova:
https://sashalatypova.substack.com/p/on-mind-control-part-2-word-to-vector
Part 1:
https://sashalatypova.substack.com/p/are-you-programmable-mind-control
I recently listened to an Ivan Doig book series (I had read them quite awhile ago now, and BTW they were free on audible- I downloaded them all).
The experience reminded me there is a huge difference between what you might call real authors and serial authors
It’s unlikely that the primary targets of this Reed screed (Basic College Girl and friends) have the capacity to parse it in any meaningful way.
The typos don’t help – get an editor, Fred!
i wish the author had learned that brevity is the soul of wit.
Just leave that attitude in the study. It has no place in the bedroom.
Dean Wormer’s wife educated us on the difference between sensual & sensuous.
Well, I had a Latin declension on the toilet this morning, but it passed.